Sunday, February 1, 2009

Chapter 1

I came back to the house and slammed the door
“You do know we share the same room?” Onew hyung surprised me when I saw him lying on the bed with a book on his hand
“Hyung, you staggered me. Sorry, I forgot” I retort and put down my bag

“Where’d you go?” he asked
“I went to school remember?” I asked him curiously throwing myself on the bed
“I know you went to school but it’s already pass seven, so after school, where did you go?” he closed his book and asked me straightly

“Sorry again, hyung. I went to Yunni’s house~”
“Is that Yunni the girl you’re always with?”
“Yeah~” I answered clumsily and sighed “I wanna eat~”

“Come here, I’ll cook you some dinner” I know he can’t stand me

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More about me—Lee Taemin
Well, as you all know, I’m adopted, I know I am coz I’m not a baby when I was adopted. I’ve been living with them since I was 8 and I’m glad I’m still is. I always ask Onew hyung so many stuffs but in return he gives it to me without any hesitation. I said I was lucky enough to have a family even there’s no father there’s always this hyung who acted one, even without a noona, there’s always eomma who always seem to be one.

“Hyung, aren’t you done yet?” I asked him holding chopsticks on my hand
“Why are you always hungry, some things might be living inside your tummy” that’s supposed to be funny but I didn’t react a bit

“It’s done!” we eat together in one plate, serving each other and playing the food.

“You wash the dishes, I’ll read my book~” I know hyung would do that but it’s worth it, at least my stomach is full.

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I yawn as I enter the room, did some stretching and scratch my head
“Sleepy much?” I don’t know how hyung always notice me but I didn’t mind him, I just sat down on the bed and stare at him

“Okay, you’re really sleepy. I’ll tuck you in, so you can sleep” every time hyung notice I’m sleepy he ended tucking me in to bed like a baby and I’m really fine with it.
“Thanks hyung~” I yawn again

“Yah, Taemin, you should be focusing on you’re studies first not on dancing, you’ll be high school next year” he’s nagging about high school again so I just closed my eyes to avoid everything he’s saying…

“I could have killed you but I can’t… coz I love you~” I can here him whispering to my ear coz he knows I’m avoiding his tenet.

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“Good morning Yunni!” I greeted her happily, I’m just in a good mood but later she’ll be dead meat
“I won’t be coming near you” she said walking backwards, she totally knows me.

“Look what I brought you!” I run towards her and showed her
“Choco pie, thanks!” she grabbed it… harshly
“Don’t come any closer!” she loves chocolate too much.

“Annyeonghaseyo~” ah Aeri Noona is finally here “Don’t you have classes?” she asked oddly
“Well, we HAD our classes early this morning and lunch time is practice time” I explained
“Are you classmates?” she asked looking at me and Yunni
“Yes, don’t mind her eating all those stuffs, she’s just really hungry” I respond

She place down all her stuffs on the floor and played the music. I was surprised when she started to dance this awesome dance moves better than Yunni’s. Same music but different dance moves
“Wow, noona where did you learn that?” I asked amazed
“I made it myself; I don’t like using other people’s dance steps”

“Yunni, come here. Why don’t we use Noona’s dance moves!” me still watching Aeri
“But we already have moves for that song” Yunni responded eating chocolates
“Yeah, but this look much better, we have plenty of time left to learn this moves”

“I watched you practiced yesterday. I think your dance steps are good, so no need to change it” Aeri said boldly
“See Taemin, change your own dance steps if you want!” and Yunni continued eating

==

[Yunni’s POV]
This Aeri unni is really amazing; she already knows the steps in just a day
“How did you do that?” I paused for a second and glanced at Taemin “I mean, when I was teaching Taemin, he got it like a week after” I was trying to annoy him

“Well, it’s really easy to learn~” she gets her handkerchief in her bag and wipe her face “Bye!” she left right after

“She’s really my type of girl~” Taemin heave a sigh
“Yah, Taemin, what are you talking about?” I hit his head
“Don’t be jealous, it’s just a little crush” Taemin said then mess my hair

“You mean infatuation?” Jonghyun oppa, my really awkward cousin suddenly entered the room
“C’mon Yunni, you’re mom want me to take you home”
“Aw, but I wanna stay~” I claim to stay

“Just go home and have some rest or just study, we have a test tomorrow” I hate it when we have exams, I have to come home early

“Come on my sweet little cousin. We’re gonna be killed by your mom if we don’t go home” Jonghyun said jokingly but it didn’t made me laugh

==

“I see you and Taemin made an improvement. You’re falling to each other~” still not funny so I looked at him heatedly
“Don’t be mad, I’ll make you chocolate milk later” Jonghyun oppa really knows what makes me weak

“Aren’t you supposed to be with you girlfriend?” I asked annoyed
“I wish I am but she’s busy studying unlike you busy dancing. You should just focus in your studies, you won’t be able to go to high school in your case” he’s really good annoying me

“You don’t need my mom to kill you. What’s the use of me?” I said fiercely

==

Next day…
“Noona, can you teach me the steps you were doing the last time?” right across the room I can here Taemin’s voice being so cute
“Sure Taemin, but you’ll treat me lunch today?” and Aeri unni’s voice too
“Araso, noona” he’s acting childish again, he’s always like that when he want something

I just played my own boom box, listen to some slow songs

“Uhm, Yunni, can you lessen the sound a bit?” Taemin asked, so I did
“Taemin, do it this way” they continue their lecture for each other

“Noona, it’s so hard, can I not do this?” he acts silly again doing some old moves he created to make me laugh and it made Aeri unni laugh, too
“So cute~” she said looking at Taemin’s eyes straightly

I can’t stop watching them do those stuffs. Can I ask myself why? Am I jealous? Am I really falling for him? Oh, eoddeokhae? No, no, this can’t be, like Jonghyun oppa said, it’s just infatuation. How am I sure?

“I’m going~” I have to leave to clear my thoughts. I wonder more in the classroom

“Yunni, why did you leave?” Taemin suddenly appears in front of me
“Nothing~” I responded
“It doesn’t seem like nothing” I’m really not good at lying, I’m worse than him when it comes to fibbing

“It’s really nothing. Don’t mind me” I said to stop him in bugging me
“If you persist” he keeps shaking his head like trying to guess what’s up with me
[END OF POV]

[Taemin’s POV]
‘Really, what’s up with her?’ I asked myself as I keep gazing at her trying to see it from her face

“Does she have a crush on me? No, that can’t be. Does she have a family problem? She would have told me. Or is it about her grades? So many things in my mind” I keep looking at her strangely

“Taemin, Lee Taemin!” I didn’t notice that the teacher was already inside the room
“Yes, ma’am?” I asked
“What were you thinking about?” I couldn’t say it’s about Yunni, they might say that we’re dating
“Stuffs~” Worst answer ever

“GIRLS!” someone screamed from the back and if I know who he was, he’s dead meat

“Quiet class. Okay, let’s start our lesson” the teacher finally stops pressuring me.
==

Wah, first chapter is such a crap… wah.. I don’t know what to do… I’m clueless about the story… My mind changes a lot….yunni.. comment.. ur d onli reader I have.. ^^
Oh, yes, Taemin is not adopted neither Onew’s brother in real life.. heheh it was bcoz of my storyline in d oder fanfic dat i wrote which Onew was d main character and dat dey r brothers in der since dey both have Lee as their last names.. crazy me o_0

-xdorkyx

4 comments:

  1. OMG UNNIE~~~~
    that was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
    keep updating, i'll keep reading ^^

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  2. > < I forgot something....
    OMG JONGHYUN'S MY COUSIN!!! THAT'S SO FREAKING COOL!!! ^^

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  3. uh-oh.. I just came across this blog. the first fanfic I found in a blog site. well, I'm chazz. u ordered from dorkistic design ^^

    anyway, I got a newly-started-but-been-awhile-not-updated blog at http://smash-jjang.blogspot.com. maybe you can check it out and comment?

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  4. JiIn!!!!!!!!!!!
    this fic is soo good!!
    I really love how Taemin and Yunni caring about each other!!
    haha, it seems there would be triangle love with Ae Ri unnie..

    and Whoa!! My jonghyunnie comes up! LOL
    Who's his Girlfriend? *shows pupppy eyes at JiIn*
    xDD
    Well, off to the next chapters! ^^

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